Well, I finally noticed that the reviewers at Literotica have rejected the epiloque of Breakdown as being too short. Lit requires individual postings to be larger than 750 words. I don't know if the review process is automated or not but apparently the fact that it is part of a larger story doesn't matter.
Rather than piss and moan about it, I need to decide what to do about it. The epilogue isn't absolutely necessary to the story... it was just a mechanism to smooth out a rather abrupt ending. I could just let it end with Chapter 4, or I could simply tack the epilogue onto the end of the Chapter 4 submission.
In its previous life on another site, Breakdown was fairly popular, receiving copious positive reader feedback, and many requests for continuing the story. While I, felt at the time, that there would be more stories forthcoming about Galen and his ladies, I had other projects on the front burner.
Now though, work on Schroedinger's Cat seems to be creeping very slowly, and maybe I need to put it aside for awhile, to see what Galen and the girls are up to. Anyone else want to weigh in on this?
QM
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