Wednesday, September 3, 2008

Family Values

Some of you may remember that I've been working on a short story for the Swarm Cycle, which is a set of stories in a collaborative universe created by the Thinking Horndog. Well, I finally finished it, and it's called Family Values. I posted it last night on ASSTR, and I may or may not post it on EWP or Literotica.

It's shorter than I thought it would be, only three chapters (about 12K-13K words), and the character development was somewhat of a surprise to me. Let me know if you like it.

4 comments:

por said...

great story line. made me feel like i was there watching it. ready for more. thanks for sharing your talent. por

Unknown said...

Good story.I do hope you will carry it on further.

The Gunny said...

Great story. I was wondering if there were going to be any Earth Patriots. Hope you write more along this line.

The Gunny said...

Great story. I love the idea that there are Earth Patriots instead of "Thak God I got picked and can abandon Earth (even though I do like them as well). I hope that you and others will expand on this storyline.