All Right!
I finally reached an acceptable stopping point with this chapter. Schroedinger's Cat, Chapter 4 - A Dismal Passage went up on ASSTR just a few minutes ago. There were several rough spots in this one, for me. You can probably figure out what they were. The ending of this one is kinda vanilla, but I think it makes a sort of sense.
I usually re-read the previous chapters when I am writing a new one, in order to maintain some sort of logical consistency to the story. In doing so for Schroedinger, I found huge numbers of typos and grammatical errors. Makes me sorry I read them. Anyway, over the next few weeks, I'll probably be reviewing,correcting, and re-posting the older stuff. What this means is, over that period, ASSTR will likely be popping my name up frequently as having new material, when in reality, it's just cleaned-up versions of the older stuff. I'll try to avoid having that happen too often, but it can't be completely avoided.
As always, constructive feedback, as well as outright praise, is appreciated.
QM
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